makaveli sabarashii's story(must edit, have to change)

this is under renovations

awww is higure those people by any chance?

cuz we'll back u up all the way!

Ichimura.Kenta wrote:

awww is higure those people by any chance?

cuz we'll back u up all the way!

ummmm duhhhhh

makaveli wrote:

this story goes back over eighty years, the story of the blue sharingan
okay back when the uchiha and senju clans fought, one of the clans who were able to hold their own, was the sabarashii clan. this clan would come to be know for its control over lightning and powerful jutsu, this power would prove not to be enough. the sabarashii clan knew they needed some kinda eyez, eyez that would put fear into even the uchiha. the clan stole a small uchiha child during the war, and the tests began. the sabarashii clan's training were enough to awaken the sharingan within the child, once the child matured and attained level 3 sharingan, they took his eyez out. the first pair of sharingan eyez failed and quickly killed the person they were implanted in because of the sheer strain, around this time more and more low level uchiha were taken and trained, then had his eyez taken out and murdered, the tests done on the eyez were yeilded no results,till the dr.makasharin sabarashii came to. this man would conculde from his reserch that the sharingan had to be altered to even have a chance to work with the nature of the sabarashii. he would perfrom many tests on the eyez, and because the uchiha and senju clans alliance, taking more children was out of the question. after more than 60 years of tests, the sabarashii clan made the first prototype of the altered sharingan, this lead to the clan's downfall, for many civil war broke out for even one of these eyez, war was waged until there were only three pairs left. of the tree pairs makakoto sabarashii (makasharin's son) implanted the eyez into a small child that almost died of hunger, the doctor died after. the small child was makaveli sabarashii, and no one knows what happened to the other 2 pairs. makaveli quickly honed the powers of his sharingan, while he continued to serch for his past, makaveli then, by luck, discovered the people who he believes can help him find out who he really is. as of now makaveli has discovered many uses for his sharingan and the strain of not being an uchiha doesnt seem to affect him, his sharingan gets a shade bluer everyday, and no one knows what this means. because of the wars and deaths makaveli dislikes any fighting, but doesnt hesitate to kill.

What the fuck man how can you make a back story about the clan that I made can you at least clear it with me you can't just make shit up about the clan that i made like 1 yr ago

tmack wrote:

makaveli wrote:

this story goes back over eighty years, the story of the blue sharingan
okay back when the uchiha and senju clans fought, one of the clans who were able to hold their own, was the sabarashii clan. this clan would come to be know for its control over lightning and powerful jutsu, this power would prove not to be enough. the sabarashii clan knew they needed some kinda eyez, eyez that would put fear into even the uchiha. the clan stole a small uchiha child during the war, and the tests began. the sabarashii clan's training were enough to awaken the sharingan within the child, once the child matured and attained level 3 sharingan, they took his eyez out. the first pair of sharingan eyez failed and quickly killed the person they were implanted in because of the sheer strain, around this time more and more low level uchiha were taken and trained, then had his eyez taken out and murdered, the tests done on the eyez were yeilded no results,till the dr.makasharin sabarashii came to. this man would conculde from his reserch that the sharingan had to be altered to even have a chance to work with the nature of the sabarashii. he would perfrom many tests on the eyez, and because the uchiha and senju clans alliance, taking more children was out of the question. after more than 60 years of tests, the sabarashii clan made the first prototype of the altered sharingan, this lead to the clan's downfall, for many civil war broke out for even one of these eyez, war was waged until there were only three pairs left. of the tree pairs makakoto sabarashii (makasharin's son) implanted the eyez into a small child that almost died of hunger, the doctor died after. the small child was makaveli sabarashii, and no one knows what happened to the other 2 pairs. makaveli quickly honed the powers of his sharingan, while he continued to serch for his past, makaveli then, by luck, discovered the people who he believes can help him find out who he really is. as of now makaveli has discovered many uses for his sharingan and the strain of not being an uchiha doesnt seem to affect him, his sharingan gets a shade bluer everyday, and no one knows what this means. because of the wars and deaths makaveli dislikes any fighting, but doesnt hesitate to kill.

What the fuck man how can you make a back story about the clan that I made can you at least clear it with me you can't just make shit up about the clan that i made like 1 yr ago

*sigh* okay what to do to it, how do you want it changed