makaveli sabarashii (repost and update)

Here is my Character

Name: makaveli "The White Dragon" Subarashii *pronunciation mah-kah- vel- lee Sab - ba - ra - shii*

Age:14

Gender: Male

Height: 5'6

Weight: 134

Nationality: Lighting Nation

Class: chunin

Weapons:a white blade with a dragon design on the hilt, the blade was formed by pure lightning carving out metal to a perfect sword design, therefore it can be used to conduct and transfer any lightning, specially made extra long kurai, two katanas, two gaint shuriken, and brass knuckles

Skills: My Clan the Subarashii can make Lightining Storms brew to multiply their power but only once a battle and can take Millions of Watts of electricity in their bodys called the Sabarashii lightning Technique and can travel close to the speed of light with lightining, i have a unique trait that allows me to control lightning and infuse tools with lightning and do the same, i also have the eight gates at my disposal

Ninja Tech: eight gates (main)

Favorite Ninja Tech: killzone death blow

summoning:bad

Hand to hand: excellent

Favorite Hand to Hand:killzone fire range

personallity: like to protect his friends, doesnt like talking about his past, and he is always hanging out with his older brother, till recentely he didnt know, makes the hardest effort fighting, but emotions sometimes get into the way, and he can be a perv sometimes......
soul element: Lightning

its hard to read, could you space it out more.